Tips to write your Application Essay
Posted On at by About usTop 10 Rules to Write By
- DO strive for depth rather than breadth; narrow your focus to one or two themes, ideas, or experiences.
- DO tell the reader what no other applicant could honestly be able to say.
- DO provide the reader with insight into what drives you--what makes you "tick."
- DO be yourself rather than pretending to be the ideal applicant.
- DO get creative and imaginative, particularly in your opening remarks.
- DO address the particular school's unique features that attract you.
- DO focus on the affirmative in the personal statement itself; consider using an addendum to explain deficiencies or blemishes.
- DO evaluate your experiences rather than merely recounting them.
- DO enlist others to proofread your essay for grammar, syntax, punctuation, word usage, and style.
- DO use a highly readable typeface with conventional spacing and margins (if you're submitting a paper-based application).
Top 10 Personal-Statement Pitfalls
- DON'T submit an expository resume; avoid merely repeating information that you've provided elsewhere in your application.
- DON'T complain or whine about "the system" or about your circumstances in life; however, constructive criticism is fine as long as it relates directly to your career goals.
- DON'T get on a soapbox and preach to the reader; while expressing your values and opinions are fine, avoid coming across as fanatical or extreme.
- DON'T talk about money as a motivating factor in your plans for the future.
- DON'T discuss your minority status or disadvantaged background unless you have a compelling and unique story that relates directly to it.
- DON'T remind the school of its ranking or prestige among the various programs of its type.
- DON'T waste your personal statement opportunity with a hackneyed introduction or conclusion.
- DON'T use a gimmicky style or format.
- DON'T submit supplementary materials unless the admissions office requests them.
- DON'T get the name of the school wrong!